Cotillion Vs. Quadrille

While I’m in the midst of writing Belle of the Ball, my forthcoming upper YA historical romance, I thought I might share some tidbits of the research I’ve been doing. I apologize that I haven’t had much time to write anything else.

As this book takes place during the Regency period, I wanted to properly research the dances. And do you know what I learned? The cotillion and the quadrille are essentially the same dance.

That might be a bit of an oversimplification, but let me explain to you a bit of what I learned.

The cotillion is a dance originating in France. It was popular up until the quadrille replaced it around 1810. It typically lasted for one hour and consisted of a “chorus” of steps interlaced with ten series of “figures” such as the popular right-hand moulinette (wherein couples revolve in a circle, joining their hands in the middle).

Is it just me, or does an hour seem like a long time to dance?

Apparently, people back then thought the same. In 1810, the quadrille became all the rage. It is nothing more than a simplified version of the cotillion. In it, the “figures” mentioned above are left out, making it less than half the length. It was common for several quadrilles to be danced in a night, with the same first, second, and third steps, but with varying fourth and fifth steps.

And that’s not all. Dance masters, frustrated with the influx of the quadrille, started to create their own country dances — which more often than not borrowed figures directly from the quadrille. Some of these dances faded out with time, but others — like the Danse Espagnuole are still around today.

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Same Old Lie – Deleted Scene

Since Same Old Lie is now on sale for 25% off until January 20th, I figured it would be a good time to share one of the many cut scenes from the original manuscript. Here’s a scene from Heather’s point of view that gets cut from the original:

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I sneak out of my room slowly, quietly, and creep down the stairs. I pause near the bottom to listen. The kitchen’s close to the stairs. Just to the right, actually, through an open doorway. I crouch at the stairs as I listen, waiting to hear if anyone’s moving around in there.

I hear the fridge door open, and the hiss of someone opening a beer bottle. I can’t go in there this morning. It isn’t worth the risk, not if he’s already drinking. I guess that means I won’t be having breakfast today. Or lunch. I rummage quickly in the change pouch of my backpack, and pull out a handful of coins. There’s enough to buy something off the canteen, at least. I won’t starve. One skipped meal is worth it, if I don’t have to see him.

He’s Mom’s Loser Boyfriend, and I hate him. Sometimes, I like to pretend that I forget his name — that’s why I call him Mom’s Loser Boyfriend, in my head — but I know it. It’s John. He’s still a loser.

I forget how long he’s been Mom’s Loser Boyfriend, how long he’s lived here. He’s been living here for a while, though, in our house. He leaves sometimes, and Mom cries, but he always comes back. I don’t know why Mom worries. I don’t know what he does when he’s gone, but it’s never important enough to keep him away for more than a day or two. I think he left for a whole week once. It was the happiest week of my life. I felt guilty though, after, for wishing that he’d stay gone even though it made Mom sad.

The wood of the railing digs into my hand and I realize that I’m clutching it too hard. I make my fingers let go, wincing as I stretch them out. Now isn’t the time to daydream, not while he’s in the house. If I sneak quietly, I can make it out the front door before he realizes I’m leaving.

My heart pounds in my ears so hard that it hurts. My breath sounds scratchy, and I try to breathe quieter, but somehow that only makes it louder. I try to strain my ears over the sound of my heart beating and the sound of my breathing so I can hear if he gets up, so I can hear if he sees me. I might need to run, to get out before he can catch me, or I’ll never make it to school. When Mom’s not home, I think I’d rather be there. It’s not always bad, at school.

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Review: Midnight Oil

When I read the first book in The Witches of Galdorheim series, Bad Spelling, it blew me away. The writing was vivid and humorous, the story engrossing. It was the kind of book I couldn’t put down, and one that stuck with me long after.

Perhaps it was holding the second book to such a high standard that led me to being just a little disappointed.

The story started out a bit slower than the last. But by the time Kat left Galdorheim, bent on rescuing her boyfriend Andy, the story picked up. Here was the action, the thrill I got from reading Bad Spelling. Kat’s scenes just flew by with my eyes glued to the screen of my e-reader.

However, unlike the first book, Midnight Oil was not written entirely in Kat’s point of view. I understand the author’s reasoning behind this and craved knowledge of the scenes from Kat’s vampiric half-brother, Rune, when they split up, but Rune’s perspective didn’t glow like Kat’s did. I wasn’t invested in what happened to him, not as much as I should have been considering he is a likeable character. Every time the book switched to his point of view, I groaned a bit under my breath and skimmed in anticipation of Kat’s forthcoming scenes.

So overall, this book wasn’t nearly as good as the last, mostly because of the forays into Rune’s point of view. Nevertheless, I’ll definitely be buying the third book. This little witch has me hooked.

See what all the hype is about by checking out Bad Spelling or Midnight Oil for yourself.

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Same Old Lie on Sale for a Limited Time!

Do you want to buy Same Old Lie at a discount price? Well, now you can! Until January 20th, you can purchase this middle grade book about domestic abuse for 25% off!

Take a look at http://bit.ly/SameOldLie to learn more about the book and read an excerpt.

 

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Review: Once A Witch

Let me start by saying that since the over-saturation of the young adult market, I’m very queasy when it comes to paranormal romances for teens. Especially those published by traditional publishers. In my experience, these are mostly a weak rehash of Twilight tropes.

Yet somehow, upon visiting my local brick-and-mortar bookstore, I walked away with a copy of Once A Witch by Carolyn MacCullough.

It sat among a nauseating sea of covers so similar to the aforementioned bestselling series that my first urge was to move on. In fact, the cover on this particular copy isn’t that different. It contains the same dark blues, blacks, and purple hues that I’ve come to associate with the genre. But it was the title that drew me in. Once a Witch, stamped in curly lettering across the front.

So I turned it over to read the back and was greeted by an endorsement quote from Megan McCafferty:

Carolyn MacCullough casts a mesmerizing spell with Once a Witch. Family secrets and sibling rivalry, time travel and magical ‘Talents’ all brew together to create a superlative — and supernatural — coming-of-age story. Add an epic battle of good versus evil and an enchanting first kiss and this bewitching novel commands a sequel.

That description in itself didn’t cinch the deal for me — after all, it could describe a refreshing new world or just another book swamping the market. Only a glimpse at the writing would end that debate. So I read the first paragraph, and ended up taking it home with me.

Once I cracked the book open again, I couldn’t put it down. Finding out what happened next superseded any other thought. Tamsin’s sometimes-snide voice enchanted me. Don’t get me wrong, the first-person present-tense took a minute or so to get used to. But once I adjusted to the style, the story swept me away.

MacCullough has her strengths and her weaknesses — it is my personal opinion that describing a kiss takes more than injecting the word “kiss” into a sentence, regardless of target audience. But where that aspect of the romance might have been lacking, the rest of the story most certainly was not. I feverishly turned the pages until I reached the very last one, and then I launched onto the web to find if there was a sequel.

(To answer your unspoken question, there is: Always A Witch, and yes, it is a book I’m now actively seeking to buy, as soon as I can get my hands on it.)

Once A Witch not only held my attention but thoroughly entertained me from cover to cover. This is one book I know I’ll be reading again.

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I’m At It Again

It’s been a while since I worked at a young adult book. I have so many (five, to be exact) in various stages of editing that only need a little TLC to be ready for submission. Don’t get me wrong, I’m slogging away at those in between other projects, but not too long ago, it seemed I promised myself I wouldn’t start another young adult before at least one of those was contracted away.

Well, I lied. Because here I am, on the brink of beginning a new book — a new series, in fact. Yes, I’ve got a little quartet all squared away in my mind.

The genre? Historical. Regency, to be exact. Aimed at an upper YA audience.

The series, to be called Dazzling Debutantes for the time being, unless I can think of something wittier before the first is finished. The first book, featuring a half-French, half-English refugee takes us headlong into Belle’s society troubles and gives us a glimpse of her three friends (each with forthcoming books).

Keep an eye on this blog for more details about Belle of the Ball.

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My Inspiration: Same Old Lie

My middle grade novella has been available for a little while now at http://bit.ly/SameOldLie. But I haven’t gotten around to speaking about my inspiration for writing this story.

The original idea (still recorded vocally on my recorder) came to me suddenly. One single scene, as found in the book, popped into my head. Here is a short excerpt from the book, as I originally saw it:
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“What did you tell your mother, huh, now, brat? Are you trying to get me in trouble, you little…” I shake my head, moaning when the pain in my eye spikes. Instead, I lay my head down on the cool wood floor. My tears cross over the bridge of my nose.

“God, shut up!” He yells. He kicks me again. For luck, I guess. I taste blood in my mouth, a sweet tang from where I’ve bitten on my lip too hard. I cringe as he lifts his foot again. “You’re so annoying! I wish you weren’t even here, you creepy little brat! You’re such a loudmouth kid!”

I’ve said, like, five words to him my whole life.

From there, I let the idea stew a while until I realized exactly what the conflict in the story would be. The first draft of the story is very different from the published version. The simple reason, because the first draft was entirely from Heather’s point of view, as written in her diary. It contained more characterization not seen in the published version, because Trevor has limited contact with Heather’s Mom, her science fair partner, or the caseworker from the Children’s Aid society. However, as my valuable fellow members of my writer’s group, Exarare, pointed out, Heather is a passive character. She’s too afraid to divulge any information or otherwise act to save herself from this situation. So the story needed to be told from someone else’s point of view. I settled on Trevor because he is her closest friend and because the doubt in the story would have been amplified due to the situation.
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Same Old Lie is now available from MuseItUp Publishing, Amazon Kindle, and more.

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Christmas Miracles – Kayla from LURKERS

Do you believe in Christmas miracles? A week ago, I would have said no. But then again, I didn’t believe that the Apocalypse really would come on December 21st, 2012.

But now, seeing that all of the adults in Toronto — no, wait. All of the adults in the world! — have gone missing, I really want to start believing in Christmas miracles.

Because how long are we supposed to still survive without our parents? Yeah, I’m sixteen (almost), but I don’t have a job. Even if I was making money, the stores aren’t open to buy food. Some people are taking it anyway, but that’s wrong, right?

I bet right about now, you’re wondering who “we” is. Not only am I in charge of surviving through gang fights, our house burning down, and discovering how to make everything right again, but I’m also saddled with my eight-year-old brother. My eight-year-old diabetic brother. After the disaster with our house, I don’t know how I’m going to be able to care for him. I don’t even know anything about his diabetes! Mom always handled that sort of thing, and I didn’t have to.

So yeah, right about now, I need a Christmas miracle. I guess Jackson is something of a miracle in himself. I mean, we’re so lucky we met him. Not only does he know a whole lot more about Josh’s illness than I do, but he’s our best bet of finding out what happened. He’s this scientific genius, after all. If only his creepy cousin Morris wasn’t hanging around all the time…

More than anything, I want a real Christmas miracle to come knocking on our door. What will we do if our parents aren’t back by December 25th?

Do you believe in Christmas miracles?

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Six Sentence Sunday: Same Old Lie

Happy Sunday, everyone! This week I’m going to give six sentences from my newest middle grade novella, Same Old Lie, about domestic abuse. When Trevor reads Heather’s diary, he discovers that she harbors a dark secret. Learn more or buy it at http://bit.ly/SameOldLie.

Heather nodded, the blond fringe of her bangs falling into her eyes. “I’m fine.” Still, there was a hushed quality to her voice. I didn’t believe her.

I brushed her hand away from her shoulder and gasped.

A large, yellow-purple bruise spanned across her skin, where her sweater had slipped off.

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New Release: Same Old Lie

Yesterday, my middle grade book about domestic abuse released from MuseItUp Publishing, for only $2.50. Here’s a bit about it:

 

Blurb:

Heather is the clumsiest girl anyone has ever seen. Or so Trevor thought, along with the rest of his classmates. But when he reads her diary, he realizes her clumsiness might just be a cover for something sinister going on at home.

Has Heather been lying to him? Or does the diary tell the lies? Trevor doesn’t know if his best friend is in mortal danger—or just playacting. What is he going to do?

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Excerpt:

“Heather!” I yelled, tearing across the field. As I watched, she crumpled to the ground, clutching at her shoulder. Jeremy started forward, but his face was scrunched in confusion. After all, he hadn’t kicked the ball that hard. What was wrong with Heather?

As I reached her, I fell to my knees beside her. She was rolled into a ball. I couldn’t see her face. Even though I knew she was hurt, I pried her limbs apart.

She was crying. That, if nothing else, told me she must be in pain.  Nobody wanted to be known as The Crybaby. Gently, I shook her, whispering, “Heather, are you all right?” I could see that she wasn’t, but it was the sort of thing you said when someone was hurt. To make sure they weren’t dying, or something.

Heather nodded, the blond fringe of her bangs falling into her eyes. “I’m fine.” Still, there was a hushed quality to her voice. I didn’t believe her.

I brushed her hand away from her shoulder and gasped.

A large, yellow-purple bruise spanned across her skin, where her sweater had slipped off. Where had she gotten that? The ball had hit hard but not enough to leave a bruise in twenty seconds. I gaped at the bruise, but she quickly covered it up. She didn’t meet my eyes or anyone else’s.

Not that anyone else was really paying attention to her. Jeremy looked guilty for having done it, and a few of our other classmates shifted, waiting to see if she would be all right. But the group of girls nearby twittered about something else completely.

I forced myself to joke. “Fall down the stairs again, Heather? Geez, you’re the clumsiest girl I know.” But even to me, my voice sounded strained.

The ghost of a smile crossed Heather’s face. “Yeah,” she whispered, not quite looking at me. “I am.”

 

 

And while you’re at it, why not take a look at Lurkers? From now until November 27th, get this YA sci-fi novel for 40% off at the MuseItUp website!

Tagline: Saddled with the care of her diabetic younger brother, how is Kayla supposed to solve a scientific mystery when she can barely pass tenth grade science?

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